- That's Juicy! 12
- Remove It! 0
You're 17 and you can't spell horsey and you added "ed" to dry hump me? Wow. Maybe a little less time submitting fake stories and some more in an English class.
I am Sorry 1#, I see the grammatical mistake I have made. Has you read this short "true" story (I still do not look at my sister the same way), you can see that I have only spent a mere 1 minute and 30, at the most, illustrating this. I partly blame auto correct for replace my words and my self for not looking over my story. Thank you 1# for your rude but informative comment.
P.s I believe that a few grammatical errors shows the reader that this is a true story because it shows yu that I am not just some writer telling fake absure stories.
lol... right
#2, or original poster, your second response was worse than the story you posted. but if it was true, you should've showed her how a stud takes care of a hot assed filly.
Why the suprise that a girl of that age could have sexual feelings, When i was her age and a bit younger i was often humping things, My favourites were pulling up my skirt and humping the arm of the sofa, The edge of the bathtub and the hard nose of my teddy bear, I was always horny at that age as most girls are so i am not unique in fact i think i masturbated just as much as my brother.
I'm sorry.. is this the English Lit group? I thought I had walked into Adult Confessions.
So, do we all agree we are now beyond simply self determining if an submission is hot, gone past arguing if it is true, and now well into critiquing the grammatical correctness? What next, style and alliteration?
Should we have submission guidelines, perhaps a peer review process? Or switch the site to a Wiki style system where we can each review and live edit an entry (along with archival history of course).
What tripe, bollocks, balderdash.
I agree with #6 if your a English Major then maybe you have chose the wrong place. Who cares if it is real or not. If you don't like it don't read it don't come here and be hateful.
Top bad you didn't fuck her!